imporve reader magnet copy.

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-title: "Neon Tan"
+title: "Michael Ferrara"
 author: "Michael Ferrara"
 cover_image: "https://downloads.michaelferrara.org/neon-tan/neon_tan_cover.jpg"
-description: "An AI's trademark silver-blue suit isn't exactly beach-town vibes, but he's determined to land his song a spot on the weekly top 40 countdown anyway. After a string of failed attempts to get noticed by the countdown's enigmatic curator DJ, he and his wisecracking seagull sidekick stumble into an open mic night just as a malware glitch hits, forcing him to trade analysis for improvisation, rallying tourists into one spontaneous singalong to discover connection was never something you could calculate."
+description: "Sign up to my mailing list and I'll send you a story about an AI, a wisecracking seagull, and a song that needs to be heard."

 # Optional italic line under the title, for handling an objection up front.
-hero_subhead: "A free short story, plus occasional emails when something new comes out."
+hero_subhead: "A short story and news about the goings on."

 # Label on the signup form's submit button.
 cta_text: "Send me the story"