From 316c55cbb1428661a58c152a6470180f586a57e4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Will Estes Date: Tue, 4 Aug 2026 21:29:23 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] imporve reader magnet copy. --- content/books/neon-tan.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/books/neon-tan.md b/content/books/neon-tan.md index 32d5acb..08fc6a9 100644 --- a/content/books/neon-tan.md +++ b/content/books/neon-tan.md @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ --- -title: "Neon Tan" +title: "Michael Ferrara" author: "Michael Ferrara" cover_image: "https://downloads.michaelferrara.org/neon-tan/neon_tan_cover.jpg" -description: "An AI's trademark silver-blue suit isn't exactly beach-town vibes, but he's determined to land his song a spot on the weekly top 40 countdown anyway. After a string of failed attempts to get noticed by the countdown's enigmatic curator DJ, he and his wisecracking seagull sidekick stumble into an open mic night just as a malware glitch hits, forcing him to trade analysis for improvisation, rallying tourists into one spontaneous singalong to discover connection was never something you could calculate." +description: "Sign up to my mailing list and I'll send you a story about an AI, a wisecracking seagull, and a song that needs to be heard." # Optional italic line under the title, for handling an objection up front. -hero_subhead: "A free short story, plus occasional emails when something new comes out." +hero_subhead: "A short story and news about the goings on." # Label on the signup form's submit button. cta_text: "Send me the story"