diff --git a/content/gift-thanks/index.md b/content/gift-thanks/index.md
index 0f5748e..4e9743c 100644
--- a/content/gift-thanks/index.md
+++ b/content/gift-thanks/index.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 ---
 title: "Here's your PDF"
-description: "Download Three Steps to Find Your Right Readers."
+description: "Download Three Steps to Find the Readers Who Need Your Stories."
 ---
 
-Thanks for signing up — here's your copy of *Three Steps to Find Your Right Readers*.
+Here's your copy of *Three Steps to Find the Readers Who Need Your Stories.*
 
 [Download the PDF](https://downloads.reground.org/three-steps-find-your-right-readers/three-steps-find-your-right-readers.pdf)
diff --git a/content/gift/_index.md b/content/gift/_index.md
index f5f33f4..69ed856 100644
--- a/content/gift/_index.md
+++ b/content/gift/_index.md
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
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-title: "Three Steps to Find Your Right Readers"
-description: "A free, no-fluff PDF for fiction authors: three concrete steps to find the readers who actually want your stories, instead of guessing and hoping."
+title: "Three Steps to Find the Readers Who Need Your Stories"
+description: "A free, no-fluff PDF for fiction authors: three concrete steps to find the readers who actually need your stories, instead of guessing and hoping."
 type: "courses"
 eec_slug: "three-steps-find-your-right-readers"
 
 # Optional italic line under the title, for handling an objection up front.
-hero_subhead: "Three concrete steps to find the readers who actually want your stories — free PDF, no fluff, sent straight to your inbox."
+hero_subhead: "Three concrete steps to find the readers who need your stories."
 
 # Optional image shown in the hero, below the subhead.
 hero_image: "/images/gift-cover.png"
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ hero_image: "/images/gift-cover.png"
 cta_text: "Send me the PDF"
 
 # Optional heading above the repeated signup form at the bottom of the page.
-repeat_cta_heading: "Ready to find your right readers?"
+repeat_cta_heading: "Ready to find the readers who need your stories?"
 
 # Optional override of the enroll form's post-submit message (rendered as markdown).
-success_message: "Check your inbox — we've sent your PDF. Can't find it? [Grab it here](/gift-thanks)."
+success_message: "Your pdf will be in your inbox in a few minutes. Can't find it? [Grab it here](/gift-thanks)."
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